시원스쿨 아이엘츠/토플

안녕하세요 강사님 오픽 새내기 직장인입니다. 자기소개부분을 써보았는데, 혹시 틀린 문법은 없는지... 맞게 썼는지 확인해주실수있나요? 1. Introduce myself 이름 Alright, I'll tell you about myself. First of all, my name is XXX and I also go by XX 기본정보 I'm in my early 20s and I'm currently betweed jobs. I've always wanted to work as a hygieniest, because I was majored in hygiene. 사는곳 Currently, I live alone in Gwanju. My family except for me, live in Seoul. Speaking of my family, there are 4 members including myself. 성격 To talk about my personality, I'm the type of person who tries to look on the bright side and esily gets along well with other people. As I breifly tell you about my personality, I am very positive and extraverted. 취미 Whenever I have nothing to do, I enjoy going to the movies or listening to music to kill time. That's a little bit about myself. + 더하여 궁금증이 있습니다. Self assessment 에서는 아파트에 홀로거주, 구직중 이렇게 기재하라고 하셨는데, 막상 답변 스크립트를 보면 가족들과 함께 산다고 이야기하고... 직장에서 무슨 직책을 맡고있는지 이야기해주시는게 좀 헷갈립니다ㅠㅠ 답변부탁드려요