시원스쿨 아이엘츠/토플

* 가족끼리 식사를 하는 전통을 사라지고있다 이유는 ?

Firsr of all, double-inmcome family can be a reason .
This is because in the past, most mothers stayed at home to cook,clean and look after thier children ,However, nowadays both parents are breadwiner due to financial burdens such as upringing or livint cost ,Thus, parents could spend less time with thier children ,which means they do not have time to eat meals together

토픽에서 벗어나나요 ??
아니면 밑에가 괜찮을 까요 ??

busy life__style__s of people in mordern society can be a reason . For example, in the past, most mothers stayed at home to cook,clean and look after thier children However, nowadays both parents are breadwiner due to financial burdens such as upringing or living cost ,Thus, parents could spend less time with thier children ,which means they do not have time to eat meals together