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I've been living in sacheon alone for one years in a studio apartment
I live on the 3th floor of a 5-story studio apartment building
As soon as I enter my house, I see a kitchen and bathroom on the forward,
on the left, there is a master bedroom
with many windows, so a lot of sunlight comes in
Our studio apartment building is old home, so it's very cheap
I'm very satisfied with it
송지원 선생님의 답변(2022.05.23)
I've been living in Sacheon alone for one year in a studio apartment.
I live on the 3th floor of a 5-story studio apartment building.
To tell you about how it looks, as soon as I enter my house, I see a kitchen and bathroom.
On the left, there is a master bedroom with many windows, so a lot of sunlight comes in.
Our studio apartment building is pretty old, so it's very cheap.
Overall, I'm very satisfied with it.
문장과 문장을 이어주는 접속사나 표현을 적절히 활용해주어야, 문장간 결속력이 높아져서 좋은 점수를 받을 수 있답니다!
* 2020 대한민국 고객만족지수 아이엘츠 부문 1위
